beginning: the guy is playing with a friend who seems to be a bad influence
middle/twist: parents don't want him to play with these friends anymore
second/twist: the kids skits
end:the kid jumps dead
Symptoms of schizophrenia include:
- hallucinations – hearing or seeing things that don't exist
- delusions – unusual beliefs not based on reality
- muddled thoughts based on hallucinations or delusions
- changes in behaviour
INT.BEDROOM
The clock flips to 8:00 Dan Stevens the 18 year old protagonist,sits on his bed throwing a ball the door bell rings.
Dan:is someone going to get the door
action:cross off the day on the calander
Dan runs down stairs
Mum: I think you're hearing things
Dan opens the door
Mark: Hey I just moved in down the street wondered if you wanted to hang out or you know just show me the sights ahah .
Dan:yeah sure.Mum I'm just going out with a friend
Mum:ok be back before dinner
Ext house
Dan:so what do you wanna do
Mark:well i did here the beach is a good place to throw some stones
Dan:sounds like a plan.its only like a ten minute walk
Mark: have you lived here all your life then?
Dan: yeah ahah you could say i know this town like my own mind aha where'd you moved from
Mark:oh you know here and there
Dan:oh right here and we are here sadly the only thing to do in this small town
Mark: no this place is stunning aha
Dan:pulls out his camera
Mark:thats a nice camera do you take lots of pictures
Dan:yeah lots of pictures but no good ones ahah
Mark:well some say i would be a good model
Dan:really?
Mark: no
Dan may I
Takes picture
The kids talk and laugh
music plays as it gets darker
Mark Its getting dark should probably head back
gets to the house
Mark:Wanna hang out tomorrow
Dan: Ok
INT House
Mum: where have you been
Dan:oh just with a friend runs up stairs
gets out of bed every day changes clothes ticks off the day of the week
EXT house
Goes to the beach again
Mark wanna throw stones
Dan throws one into the sea
Mark hey try and hit that seagull
Dan no its wrong
Mark do it don't be a girl throw it throw it
Dan no
Mark pushes him gets bruises and cuts
Dan throws the stone and hits the seagull
Mark ahah did you see it ahah maybe its dead ahah \
Dan:your crazy
Mark ever think maybe you're the crazy one
Dan I'm going home
Mark goes back home
MUM:what happened to you looks at the cuts and bruises
Dan:just got in a fight with a friend thats all
Mum:hmm i don't want you seeing this friend any more
Dan mum leave me alone I'm not a child anymore
next day he's waiting outside of the door for him
Mark:hey what you doing out side
Dan:my mum says i shouldn't hang out with you
MarkWhat ahah thats ridicules
Dan:yeah i know
Mark:we don't need her lets run away
Dan:ahah no we couldnt
Mark:why not you a child you need your mum to tuck you in at night
Dan:no thats not it
Mark:aww baby luvs his mummy
Dan:no stop it
Mark:change my nappy mummy and did a dodo
Dan:shut up shut up
Mark:ohhh look who's found his back bone \
Dan:fine lets run away tonight ill pack when i get home
Mark:now you're talking
day turns tonight
Int the room
Int the room
MUM: goes to his room and see's the friends photo album and the pictures go from mark and dan to just dan
Calls the police saying that her son who is mad has gone missing
External
Dan:its too far
Mark:you can make it just jump
Dan:no
Mark:don't be a wimp is it because mum isn't here to hold your hand
Dan:jumps
black out
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